[LDES-technology] Clean version of the paper

[Sarah Kurtz]

Hi, Rui,

This is shaping up nicely. I didn’t get through the entire document, but I made a few notes in the attached.  Perhaps others can work from this so you don’t need to combine so many comments.
Sarah

On Jun 12, 2021, at 7:06 AM, Shan, Rui <rui.shan at unc.edu<mailto:rui.shan at unc.edu>> wrote:

Hi Team,

Sorry for my absence of the last meeting

Here I enclose a clean version that incorporates most, if not all the comments. I also update the tables with new data from companies. I am still working on the plots and hope to update them this weekend while waiting for a few more companies’ data coming in (Invinty, a hydrogen company, and Renewell).

Best,
Rui Shan

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