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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you very much!<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From:
</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Sergio Castellanos <sergioc@utexas.edu><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, May 17, 2021 at 1:44 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>Sarah Kurtz <skurtz@ucmerced.edu>, Shan, Rui <rui.shan@unc.edu><br>
<b>Cc: </b>ldes-technology@lists.ucmerced.edu <ldes-technology@lists.ucmerced.edu>, Kittner, Noah <kittner@unc.edu>, Jeremiah Reagan <jreagan@ucmerced.edu><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: Paper draft about LDES comparison and their application<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Rui, team,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Please find my edits attached.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Sarah Kurtz <skurtz@ucmerced.edu><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, May 12, 2021 at 2:10 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>"Shan, Rui" <rui.shan@unc.edu><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"ldes-technology@lists.ucmerced.edu" <ldes-technology@lists.ucmerced.edu>, Noah Kittner <kittner@unc.edu>, Jeremiah Reagan <jreagan@ucmerced.edu>, Sergio Castellanos <sergioc@utexas.edu><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: Paper draft about LDES comparison and their application</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I spent some more time on this. I really like how it is shaping up.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I’m attaching a few more edits/comments, but also wanted to note the high-level comments:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">• Although I very much like the footprint graph, I don’t think we should assume that the footprint is linear with energy rating. I think we will need to go back to the companies to get that added information. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">• So, I’m wondering if we should provide a summary each company that would include <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">- the three graphs with just the information for that company <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">- the data driving the three graphs<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">- the data we plan to put in the new table<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">- any description we plan to put in the text<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">- request for a drawing to show the footprint for a reference system.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">They could then identify any needed changes, especially they could give us data for the footprint as a function of energy rating.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">We might ask them if they could give us the $/kWh as a function of kWh rating curve (I think we should ask them to make an assumption to fix the ratio of the kWh/kW ratings to generate that curve. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you for continuing to move this forward! I’m looking forward to making some good progress on it tomorrow.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Sarah<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On May 10, 2021, at 12:39 PM, Shan, Rui <<a href="mailto:rui.shan@unc.edu">rui.shan@unc.edu</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Hi team,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Here I attached the current draft about the LDES technology comparison. Although we may still need more data and I am still working on the summary table, I feel it is OK to read after I composed the conclusion
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Best,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt">Rui</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><paper draft ver5.docx><o:p></o:p></p>
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