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<div class="">I spent some more time on this. I really like how it is shaping up.</div>
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<div class="">I’m attaching a few more edits/comments, but also wanted to note the high-level comments:</div>
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<div class="">• Although I very much like the footprint graph, I don’t think we should assume that the footprint is linear with energy rating. I think we will need to go back to the companies to get that added information. </div>
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<div class="">• So, I’m wondering if we should provide a summary each company that would include </div>
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<div class="">- request for a drawing to show the footprint for a reference system.</div>
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<div class="">They could then identify any needed changes, especially they could give us data for the footprint as a function of energy rating.</div>
<div class="">We might ask them if they could give us the $/kWh as a function of kWh rating curve (I think we should ask them to make an assumption to fix the ratio of the kWh/kW ratings to generate that curve. </div>
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<div class="">Thank you for continuing to move this forward! I’m looking forward to making some good progress on it tomorrow.</div>
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<div class="">On May 10, 2021, at 12:39 PM, Shan, Rui <<a href="mailto:rui.shan@unc.edu" class="">rui.shan@unc.edu</a>> wrote:</div>
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Hi team,</div>
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Here I attached the current draft about the LDES technology comparison. Although we may still need more data and I am still working on the summary table, I feel it is OK to read after I composed the conclusion and revised the plots. Hope you may find it interesting.</div>
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Best,</div>
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