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<div class="">Based on the excellent feedback and after much thought, I have pretty much totally rewritten it.</div>
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<div class="">I concluded that the two primary objectives were:</div>
<div class="">• Having a ready answer about what is included in long-duration storage. These questions at the first public workshop were coming mostly from biogas and hydrogen perspectives. Given the opposition of many to calling biogas “storage," I backed
off to make the point that we need to model these options, but we might not want to label them as “storage”</div>
<div class="">• The more solutions we consider, the better our chances of finding robust, low-cost solutions. I feel strongly that we need to include cross-sector storage in the options we study, but I concluded that the way I was presenting it wasn’t being
persuasive, so I took a new direction with a new look. </div>
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<div class="">With Dan’s encouragement, I am planning to submit this to “Issues in Science and Technology”, which focuses more on policy and less on technical papers. </div>
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<div class="">I’m pasting the (partial) directions for submission below. I am planning to submit it as a “Perspective essay” which should be 2000-2500 words - you’ll see that the new version caters to the policy focus. I am open to any of you expanding it
to a longer technical version - perhaps using some of the graphics from the first version - if you would like.</div>
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<div class="">Given that we need to focus on the modeling/analysis and that the editors are likely to ask for changes, I’m hoping to keep further discussion on this to a minimum, though it would still be good for us to have a common vocabulary and understanding
as a team so maybe we should discuss it on a Friday some week.</div>
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<div class="">So, my request for you is:</div>
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<div class=""><b class="">Do you want to be a coauthor on this? (It will not count as a peer-reviewed journal article) Do you have suggestions that are clear improvements (I’m trying to avoid word smithing by a dozen people but am pleased to make substantive
improvements) I’m hoping to submit this before the end of the month (unless the CEC decides they want to micromanage it), so hope that your reply can come by Feb. 25. </b></div>
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<div class="">Thanks!</div>
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<div class="">Sarah</div>
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<div class="">PS I do expect I will edit this more, but am trying to balance the need to get it submitted with the probability that I could continue editing it for months… </div>
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